Smack
"Now what is it?"
"You're not paying attention!"
"I'm listening, say what you have to."
"Its not going to be something you like."
"I dont always like what you say, but I do still listen. "
"Well, I'm not in love anymore."
"Buy a new purse then."
"Huh?"
He turns around to look at her.
"I noticed you seem to like green a lot more now a days, buy a green one."
Whack
"What was that for?"
"I dont love YOU anymore."
"And why not?"
"Cos... well... u kno..." Hesitation
He smiles and takes her hand.
"Its just a phase baby, of course you love me. Who else would love you back like I do?'
"Youre taking me for granted!?!?"
Hugs her
"Not granted... I know you, you cant live without me. "
She mumbles...
"That is just worse."
"Now what is it?"
"You're not paying attention!"
"I'm listening, say what you have to."
"Its not going to be something you like."
"I dont always like what you say, but I do still listen. "
"Well, I'm not in love anymore."
"Buy a new purse then."
"Huh?"
He turns around to look at her.
"I noticed you seem to like green a lot more now a days, buy a green one."
Whack
"What was that for?"
"I dont love YOU anymore."
"And why not?"
"Cos... well... u kno..." Hesitation
He smiles and takes her hand.
"Its just a phase baby, of course you love me. Who else would love you back like I do?'
"Youre taking me for granted!?!?"
Hugs her
"Not granted... I know you, you cant live without me. "
She mumbles...
"That is just worse."
4 comments:
LoL! Speaks volumes about Over Confidence!
"Not granted... I know you, you cant live without me. " -- love this line... contradiction at its best
ok i got confused.. Dialogue format would help
awesome poem
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